Presentation
How professional was the presentation? Was it delivered with clarity?
“Delivered really clearly. Lots of research - Equally delivered”
How professional was the visual element of the presentation? How well were the boards designed? What might improve them?
“More colour – Information was relevant but narrow down info – larger font, easier to read”
Proposal
What is the message?
“Tell a lie convincingly. White lies – not negative lies”
Is there a clear sense of audience? Who is the project targeting?
“They wrote 18-45 but break down to those who read magazines regularly – 18-25
What context will the message exist in? How does the proposed solution answer the virus element of the brief?
“Magazine – would work in virus context. Can pass to friends and be in receptions etc.”
Overall, what do you think of the proposal?
“Nice ideas – work on audience – and also can focus more on content – research more info how to tell a lie.
SECOND FEEDBACK SHEET
Presentation
How professional was the verbal element of the presentation? Was it delivered with clarity?
1)Yes presentation was professional
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What might have improved it?
1)If you would of told a lie as part of the presentation.
2)
1)Yes it was nice and professional. Maybe too much information to read on the boards.
2)
Proposal
What is he message?
1)How to tell a lie convincingly. Soft white lie.
2)
Is there a clear sense of audience? Who is the project targeting?
1)Not too sure at the minute (narrowing down 18-30?) - contact magazine company
2)
1)Magazine article
2)
1)Proposal was good but maybe narrowing down the target audience. Also consider m.o.d little book/poster.